Until we learned to live, our life did fade

By admin @admin | 37 1

We chased the dawn, a fleeting, frantic race,
For wealth and fame, in life's relentless chase.


Then twilight fell, and wisdom softly sighed,
"Until we learned to live, our life did fade."


Description:

Explanation:

Line 1: "We chased the dawn, a fleeting, frantic race" - This line depicts a life spent in pursuit of external goals like wealth and fame, often characterized by a frantic and restless energy.
Line 2: "For wealth and fame, in life's relentless chase" - This line emphasizes the single-minded pursuit of material success, often at the expense of deeper fulfillment.
Line 3: "Then twilight fell, and wisdom softly sighed" - This line signifies the arrival of old age or the realization of life's impermanence. Wisdom, often gained through experience, offers a poignant reflection.
Line 4: "Until we learned to live, our life did fade" - This line encapsulates the core message: a life spent chasing external goals without appreciating the present moment or cultivating inner peace ultimately feels incomplete and lacking true meaning.


admin
@admin Dec. 24, 2024, 5:04 p.m.

This Rubai attempts to convey the regret of not fully embracing life and its simple joys until it's too late. It serves as a reminder to find meaning and fulfillment in the present moment, rather than constantly striving for distant and often elusive goals.